UPS result

Welcome back from your respective kampung and get real, here you are, back to your routine college life again. (drumroll) yes.....your long awaited results are ready.
What can I say...I asked you guys to write something that would touch my sensory motor and sure enough I was touched more than 5 senses.
Being a college student is a real challenging task, testing your patience and a platform not only for you to gain knowledge but to blossom(uh-uh not Power Puff stuff!).
The result I obtained from your essays are I need to recheck my perception and expectation.
If you still are in the dark about what I am saying here, in simple ENGLISH...
"Let's make this world a better place to live in" , all right amigos?
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